red, angry, and pointy doesn't this read like stranger danger to you
[ they won't find rin if people are turning tail on first sight in fear of getting (literally) eaten alive or something. why not throw gou in the back for pathos??? at least they'll know he's brotherly, if nothing else. ]
how far have you gotten? if you send your current progress over I should have an easier time explaining to the printing attendant why we need so much paper
[ look, he just want to see rin and kisumi not demented or sobbing. normal wants and needs. ]
they might get scared with just the first one to press further though shouldn't it be the other way around? we can just tell people he has a bit of a temper
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[RED HAIR POINTY TEETH EXTREME EXPRESSIONS PROBABLY GOING TO CRY check check check and other stuff.
he couldn't convey the dubstep loop thru sketch sadly. ........sa..d..l.....y...]
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doesn't this read like stranger danger to you
[ they won't find rin if people are turning tail on first sight in fear of getting (literally) eaten alive or something. why not throw gou in the back for pathos??? at least they'll know he's brotherly, if nothing else. ]
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[point....
hard to forget rihgt....]
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we should be showing his good sides, not advertising his bad
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[BEING HONEST, HONESTLY...]
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you're right, this is his /worst/ side
you could've drawn him
smiling
maybe
[ maybe. ]
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[being a little shit? ye..a... but ALSO HE REALLY THINKS THIS IS TRUE.....]
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can you at least keep some spares on-hand
in case people ask for additional info
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okay
[IF U INSIST...]
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thank you for being so thoughtful haru!
I really appreciate it
if they knew, I'm sure both of them would feel the same way
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don't thank me
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are you sketching them out now
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we're still using the first ones
[aka: yes he is.....]
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if you send your current progress over I should have an easier time explaining to the printing attendant why we need so much paper
[ look, he just want to see rin and kisumi not demented or sobbing. normal wants and needs. ]
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see attached
[he didn't do it bc u asked, makoto he just did it bc u asked....]
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why don't we put this on the poster instead?
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if anyone asks
[aka: we are still using the originals he says but you can use these supplements however......HE GUESSES....]
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shouldn't it be the other way around?
we can just tell people he has a bit of a temper
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but that's not the point haru!! we should be trying to make a good first impression of him from the get-go