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[considers the fact that rin probably likes scaring makoto, considers that statement, considers....

hm.]

no one is scared of rin -- pets or small children...or any children

[ that he knows of..... and any fear haru ever had regarding rin is too serious for this conversation really so it bears no relativity, though it's worth mentioning in the passing tendencies of bracket information....still, for the moment haru cannot for the life of him understand why makoto doesn't think his Excellent Depiction of Rin Matsuoka should be revised!!!! ]

[ well, dubstep plays on an endless loop whenever he walks into the room, and he does have ambiguously sharp teeth, good for ... biting things ...

LOOK, THERE'S NO REASON FOR MAKOTO TO HAVE TO JUSTIFY HIMSELF IN WORDS, much less bracket text. rin's a force to be reckoned with. ]

this picture might change their mind
is this really what you want to go with haru?

[ and there makoto goes. a paragon to clinical pushovers everywhere. ]

it covers the general idea doesn't it?

[RED HAIR POINTY TEETH EXTREME EXPRESSIONS PROBABLY GOING TO CRY check check check and other stuff.

he couldn't convey the dubstep loop thru sketch sadly. ........sa..d..l.....y...]

red, angry, and pointy
doesn't this read like stranger danger to you

[ they won't find rin if people are turning tail on first sight in fear of getting (literally) eaten alive or something. why not throw gou in the back for pathos??? at least they'll know he's brotherly, if nothing else. ]

people will definitely know if they saw him though

[point....

hard to forget rihgt....]

they're more likely to flee out of fear
we should be showing his good sides, not advertising his bad

i don't think this is his bad side

[BEING HONEST, HONESTLY...]

[ WHAT THE HELL IS THIS WEAK-ASS EXCUSE ... ]

you're right, this is his /worst/ side
you could've drawn him
smiling
maybe

[ maybe. ]

it doesn't look that different...

[being a little shit? ye..a... but ALSO HE REALLY THINKS THIS IS TRUE.....]

I can't change your mind on this, can I
can you at least keep some spares on-hand
in case people ask for additional info

[A FEW MINUTES PASS...]

okay

[IF U INSIST...]

[ #gunnacheckurpocketsl8r ]

thank you for being so thoughtful haru!
I really appreciate it
if they knew, I'm sure both of them would feel the same way

[#NO]

don't thank me

[ #NO ESCAPE. ]

are you sketching them out now

[ #EXCUSE ]

we're still using the first ones

[aka: yes he is.....]

how far have you gotten?
if you send your current progress over I should have an easier time explaining to the printing attendant why we need so much paper

[ look, he just want to see rin and kisumi not demented or sobbing. normal wants and needs. ]

[these needs he does not understand....well wait yes he does....stares at the History of Rin and Haru, Never a Tale of More Woe.....but still....]

see attached

[he didn't do it bc u asked, makoto he just did it bc u asked....]

[ it's late, i'm too tired to put this up on imgur, let's just say haru linked him this.]

why don't we put this on the poster instead?

this one is just for clarification

if anyone asks

[aka: we are still using the originals he says but you can use these supplements however......HE GUESSES....]

they might get scared with just the first one to press further though
shouldn't it be the other way around?
we can just tell people he has a bit of a temper

the first one first. we'll include a fact thats not scary about him

he does like romantic comedies
but that's not the point haru!! we should be trying to make a good first impression of him from the get-go